After reading the intro paragraphs of my peers, I can say I saw a lot of things I can potentially include in my own paragraph. I liked the different ideas and stances different people had on the TED Talks and Southan. I also liked how some people started their paragraph with a quotation or a question to hook the reader. That is something I may consider doing for my own intro paragraph. Reading other people’s intro paragraphs opened me up to new ideas that I never would have thought about if I never peer reviewed other writing, and I hope it will improve my own.
Link to comments: http://elishaemerson.uneportfolio.org/2018/02/06/stakes-and-the-introductory-paragraph-2/#comment-350
Nick, I’m glad that you found some ideas that you would like to try. Did you find something specific that you feel really worked? Your hyperlink doesn’t seem to work. This link can help you: http://www.wpbeginner.com/beginners-guide/beginners-guide-on-how-to-add-a-link-in-wordpress/. It’s s simple problem to solve as soon as you learn what button to push.
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