Blog #5

Ideas- In Jeff’s paper I liked how he decided to connect all forms of art to each other to show how inspirational art really is.

“Music inspires fashion, painting, transforms directing, dancing can be connected through drawing, art as a whole is truly something amazing that many of us take for granted.”

Evidence- In Jacob’s paper, he pulled a quote from Southan to help further his argument.

“In Southans words, “ does your good deed make as much of a difference as simply handing over the money? If not. How good of a deed is it really ?” the message is clear, but is there movement limited to people who have a large enough income to support donating to a cause?”

Organization- In Jayke’s paper, I commented how he connected two quotes that were used earlier. This could be used to help continue the argument against the EAs.

“Sometimes artists paint the world burning, however sometimes they paint houses and change people’s world.”

Reviewing my peer’s papers only focusing on global edits was more challenging than I expected. Students, along with myself have always been pushed to have perfect grammar, spelling, etc. so having to completely ignore that and dive deeper into the writing was a challenge. However, I hope my comments will help the authors further their arguments and strengthen their writing. The idea of global edits will also help me with my own writing, since I will be able to use my own comments on other papers to help push my ideas in my own paper.