For my essay, I plan on using pictures to help develop my argument, because the pictures can support my ideas. By arranging the pictures to go along with quotes or claims I include, the reader will have a better understanding of my argument. I also intend to use hyperlinks to similar articles to add more credibility to my argument. I plan on using the suggestions from my other two essays to make my writing and formatting stronger.
To start my essay, I will introduce what beauty is in my own definition, which will lead me to my thesis. My first paragraph will expand on my definition and pictures and hyperlinks will be used to help that expansion. My other body paragraphs will include quotes from Armstrong to help support my argument and I’ll include another opinion to show why my argument is correct. I will then restate my thesis and conclude my essay.
i think you have a good plan for your modes of communication, and these will absolutely help the readers to understand what you are talking about as long as you can find images and hyperlinks that relate to the quotes and ideas that you are discussing. you also have a good outline for your essay and you seem to know what you want to do with it.
You have a good idea for your 3 modes of communication and adding pictures will help express your ideas of beauty more clearly. Using quotes from Armstrong will help support your argument and also adding his opinions and connecting those to your own thoughts. Expanding off of what you think is considered to be beautiful will give the reader a better understanding on what you are going to be writing your paper on. Also remember to add a classmates “Let’s Talk About Art” presentation to your paper. Connecting beauty of your opinions and their opinions will make your paper stronger and more complete.