Goal: My main goal during the revision process is to narrow down my thoughts and make them as specific as possible. I feel that I have a good thesis in my rough draft, but after that I kind of go all over the place. I mentioned beauty in terms of sports and cars in my rough draft. If I can stray towards one topic, that will make my argument clearer and easier for me to meet the required word count.
Plan: To construct a strong essay, I need to incorporate one of my classmate’s “let’s talk about art” project. By using that, I will have a stronger argument for my essay. By having someone else’s opinion back my own, my argument will only grow stronger and I will have constructed a solid essay.
Challenge: My biggest challenge I am going to encounter is the flow of my essay. As I previously mentioned, I need to narrow my topics to help make my argument clearer to understand. Whichever direction I choose to go, I also need to somehow incorporate a classmate’s project. Relating those two things together, while keeping a consistent flow in my essay will be a challenge.
Resources: “Let’s Talk About Art”
Photos of things that are beautiful
A strong outline can help you articulate a strong argument and stick to that argument. 3/3